Academy synthesis: compare meaning after editing; preserve evidence qualifiers, voice, metaphor and aspiration.
Examples are craft demonstrations, not evidence that original and revised statements are factually equivalent.
The examples on59 convert possibility to a future assertion and add specific weather facts;68 adds sampling timing;102 substitutes improvement for unspecified change. The book also allows contextual exceptions to stylistic defaults.
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Composition, usage and approach to style; especially59,68,102,127,133–134
All181 supplied sheets read; locators checked. Verified denotes source location, not truth of every author prescription. Copy limitations110/126 retained.
Source-grounded paraphrase. See the linked Literature Note for the complete181-sheet examination, primary usage corrections, copy limitations and proposed Academy editing protocol.